(Written by Keenen)
(Written by Keenen)
(Written by Salik)
(Written by Sam)
(Written by Sam)
(Written by Keenen)
In the introduction part of the script, we decided to remove the slow motion sound effect. This is because there was already another sound effect within this section of the script and we didn't want to overlap the two, because it would've sounded distorted. We also removed a part of the montage of Cal playing football. This is because there would have been too many clips, and as the introduction has to be succinct to fit the documentary style.
In the first scene, we added an answer that Cal will follow when talking. This is so that the documentary will have structure. Again we did this for the answer that Cal's friends will give about his football. This was recommended to us by the client, and was part of the feedback we received.
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